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obvious
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:54:01 PM in AEST
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with my taste in her mouth
and her heart bound in her throat
its obvious that she needs it all
she steals it all from me
she wants it more
because she needs it all
she pierces the silence,
with her screams of denial
the strength to shatter any peaceful
moment
turn it to chaos
while i wonder why this is all beautiful to me
shes so pure that its almost rare
she wanders through life
with answers to questions i never even knew
she lives the wonders...like i wish i could
in the silence i will find her and lose her in the ashes of the chaos
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2003-10-11 22:54:01]
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Re: obvious
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:09:26 PM AEST
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| Wow... that was beautiful. Excellent, excellent job. My heart actually kind of hurts right now. Weird. |
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Re: obvious
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:45:19 AM AEST
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wow! this is such an amazing poem! I love this! wow! and i think it would make a beautiful song.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: obvious
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 07:34:24 AM AEST
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Wow an excellent write.
Emma. |
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Re: obvious
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:24:42 PM AEST
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Omg... this is amazing. One of the most brilliant pieces I've ever read. Sensational. Keep 'em coming!!!!
~ Moonlit |
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