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Slavery of Red Roses
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:26:24 PM in AEST
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Swords in hand at the bloody fields of history
We rend our blades through dogma and humility
Carve the future according to our will
Set worlds ablaze with our seething fire
Let you all acknowledge that we are here
As masters to rule this failing humanity
Our beings formed in rage and defiance
With strength to trample the weak and the foolish
And so we march with burning brands
Temples of flame on our path to glory
Die roses as slaves to my swords of fire
we roam the land ... we kill we make u suffer ...
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cant-skate
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2003-10-11 18:26:24]
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Re: Slavery of Red Roses
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by fallensilence on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:08:16 PM AEST
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this reminded me of a song by one of my favorite bands FSF they have a line that goes "lets set this city ablaze- we'll burn down the monuments and build mountains in there place". although your poem is written in a different sense i thought it was great especially if it can remind me of other emotions i've feltt before. great job.
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Re: Slavery of Red Roses
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 03:29:17 AM AEST
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| great write.......as always!!!!! |
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