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WHERE'S ALL MY CUSTOMERS?
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Bird Seed Restaurant
Empty, lonely, "Business Closed!"
Customers flown South
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
... [
2003-10-11 17:24:25]
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Re: WHERE'S ALL MY CUSTOMERS?
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by norm on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:39:55 PM AEST
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Your Haiku is super quality
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It's sad the restaurant closed up tight
Not only daytime but also night,
Where do birdies get there grub
Down the street and in the 'PUB'
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Re: WHERE'S ALL MY CUSTOMERS?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:57:47 PM AEST
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I agree with Norm...EXCELLENT HAIKU, Connie.. well done!!
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Re: WHERE'S ALL MY CUSTOMERS?
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 07:40:41 PM AEST
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very enjoyable
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Re: WHERE'S ALL MY CUSTOMERS?
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by Crow on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:10:18 PM AEST
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| don`t be sad they will come back! Crow |
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Re: WHERE'S ALL MY CUSTOMERS?
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 03:26:43 AM AEST
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ooohhhh i'm sorry :(
great haiku!!!!! |
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