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Untangling The Knots
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Tuesday, 20th August 2002 @ 04:26:22 AM in AEST
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Why does it come and go
It’s so difficult to understand
My thoughts I think I should know
All jumbled within my mind
I can’t make sense of anything
As others appear to do
Is it supposed to be this confusing
Or is it just I and not you
Surely there must be a way
To enjoy a simpler life
I’m struggling to find the answer
All I come up with is trouble and strife
How can I really expect
Anyone else to believe my dreams
When even I am simply unable
To make sense of a single thing
I’ve been led to believe I’m intelligent
By those folk who think they know
If I am then why am I stuck here
In this pain filled merry-go
Round and round I wander
Locked inside my scrambled head
Am I never to just enjoy life
Until the day I appear to be dead
No one will give me the answer
Work it out for myself is the way
I’m getting tired of just not getting it
More and more weary every day
I simply just don’t get it
All others I see look happy
I keep trying so hard to live this life
But every morning I wake feeling crappy
I want to live in my dreams
Even though they’re not always good
I feel so comfortable when I’m in there
Everything’s in a better mood
I wish you could see what’s in here
I wish you could see how I care
It’s amazing the amount of sweet emotion
Lies beneath the roots of my hair
I started this with come and go
I’m sure you know of this time
When my fingers began to tap these keys
I had nothing resembling a rhyme!
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Unaekseveer1
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Re: Untangling The Knots
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 20th August 2002 @ 06:07:54 AM AEST
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I think this happens to us all at some point and time....then suddenly one day things just begin to make sense as I am sure they will for you..wonderful write....
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Re: Untangling The Knots
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 04:44:38 AM AEST
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Hi and Thankyou Lasca, I'm hoping today the22nd might be that day! As today I officially became a student of I.T. once again and without being a tax dodger!
It does feel good and brighter even though it's almost dusk outside. I'm also envisaging this will give me lots of NEW stuff to write about!
With love
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Re: Untangling The Knots
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:32:47 AM AEST
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| Dean, I know that this happens to all of us at times. Even to me and I know that most of my poetry is rather happy, but there still is a lot of unhappiness inside me that I am just not ready to write about yet. But I never know when I will write about anything, so when ever it does happen that I write about the unhappiness inside I will know that I an truly begining to heal. I know that I have started to heal by writing abou the stuff that I've already written about, but there is still more. And I won't know when it will come out. Any way, another great poem Dean. I love it. |
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Re: Untangling The Knots
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 09:55:15 AM AEST
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And I look forward to reading, for your healing sake as well as my own pleasure Candice.
I hope that sounds right!
I mean reading your poems be they sad or happy pleases me greatly, because you do them so well and all I've read so far has enduced an emotion or two, or three which can only be a good thing!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Untangling The Knots
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 10:21:59 AM AEST
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Dean, Yes that sounds right, and I know exactly what you mean. I am also glad that you like my poetry so well. It makes me feel good to know that my poems are well liked. I am rather self contious about my poems.
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