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Death is near
Contributed by
mercedes
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:22:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im in a world of shadows
Demons are my only friends
I tremble in fear, knowing they are near
Yet I long for their touch, their deadly embrace
I cannot move, I cannot escape
They are behind me, in front of me, everywhere
I cannot see them, but I know they are there
Waiting, silent, patient
I hear them inch closer, step by step
Their sharp talons tapping the floor
I feel their breath on my body
A hot breeze that makes my blood go cold
I want to run, I want to hide
I can only stand there, my arms open wide
"Come to me my friends" I hear myself say
While inside I scream, stop, stay away
I do not fear death, I welcome its embrace
As I cry in fear and pain, my voice forever silent
My demon friends take me into a world unknown
Claws ripping, teeth biting, death is finally here.
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mercedes
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2003-10-11 12:22:42]
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Re: Death is near
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:13:20 PM AEST
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| Sounds like some succubus fun. Excellent write. |
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Re: Death is near
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 09:55:04 PM AEST
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Beautifully dark, well written, put the heebies up me, loved this poem.
Keep it up, you have a real talent for it. |
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Re: Death is near
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:16:15 AM AEST
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apromise once made by a friend to stand by you a promise that will never fail
love you feel ur pain,
ur sis,
iza'rae |
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