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You (Mine to Hold)
Contributed by
lgcmusic
on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:22:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your eyes
I could write a thousand words about your eyes
Their beautiful darkness intrigues my own
To stare deep inside longingly
Wishing you were mine to hold
Your lips
I could write a thousand words about your lips
So full and pink and beautiful
Encouraging me to lean over
And feel their softness on my own
I wish you were mine to hold
Your arms
I could write a thousand words about your arms
Strong and inviting, they leave me hoping
That you'll swallow me up in them
And shelter me from the storm
I so wish you were mine to hold
Your charm
I could write a thousand words about your charm
Makes me giggle like a schoolgirl at your wit and intellect
I gravitate to all you have to say
I want you to be mine to hold
You are the perfect man
Although idealistic as I do sound
I know you're only human
But I can't help but daydream on
And pretend you are mine to hold...
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Re: You (Mine to Hold)
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:28:31 AM AEST
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I could write a thousand reasons why i love this poem.
A beautiful write, well done.
I love it. |
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Re: You (Mine to Hold)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:33:47 AM AEST
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Lgc, this is very beautiful.... Well done!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: You (Mine to Hold)
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 10:44:44 AM AEST
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| I love this poem- the way you describe him is so picturesque. Great write! |
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Re: You (Mine to Hold)
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by norm on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:13:43 AM AEST
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Your poem is very well structured
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I wish your dream of love comes true
And life deals happily with you,
Here and there some folks make it,
Here and there some folks take it... |
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Re: You (Mine to Hold)
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:06:08 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful... I love it |
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Re: You (Mine to Hold)
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by fredmonte101 on
Saturday, 14th June 2014 @ 02:12:22 PM AEST
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| Now that was really good! I sure hope you find Mr. Perfect adn then I hope you can Hold onto Him! Good write. |
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