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Y(me)OU
Contributed by
Cancer
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Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:56:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you can't run
can't turn away
cuz i'm always with you
so deep ingrained
by design or mistake
the fact remains
you can't escape me
hated me for what i'd become
but, i was inside you all along
the monster i turned out to be
hidden in you, too scared to see
everything you hate about me
was part of you all along, i see
i became what you were too scared to be
now you resent me because i'm free
shut your windows, lock your doors
i'm still inside you, part of you
shut out the world and rot inside
the flesh prison that you've designed
too afraid to be yourself
always living for someone else
but, no matter what you say or do
you know i'm still inside of you
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-10-11 00:56:53]
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Re: Y(me)OU
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:01:32 AM AEST
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I read u loud and clear.
Very creative and great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Y(me)OU
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:07:12 AM AEST
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I understand this quite well.... good write...
Keep them coming....
Jenni |
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Re: Y(me)OU
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:40:51 AM AEST
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| yes yes yes....great work!!!! |
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Re: Y(me)OU
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:14:39 AM AEST
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Yes you definately got your point across in this excellent write. Good job.
Emma. |
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Re: Y(me)OU
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:16:24 PM AEST
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| Excellent work. I love how the title is, especially how it fits the poem. Reminds me of the song "(sic)". |
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Re: Y(me)OU
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:59:57 AM AEST
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not repetitive at all. I think we all have the monster inside of us just waiting to drag us under. Another great write man.
Bobo (Joel) |
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