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PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:25:46 PM in AEST
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Tall, handsome, well that's true
my first impression of you.
Spending money so free
you looked straite at me.
Maybe you thought me weak
as I silently speak.
You said I might be the one
I should of turned-n-run!
Trying for six years to break
my soul to steal-n-take!
You tried to make a
play ground on my mind, hey!
My mind was streached long ago
but you'll not have my soul!
See that doen't belong to me
'cause in-luv I'm tottaly free!
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-10-10 22:25:46]
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:35:31 PM AEST
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I'm so glad that he is now your EX. Men like that, err let me not start. Good write.
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by trippendicular on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:58:48 PM AEST
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Great poem. I'm glad you're not with him anymore
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:42:02 AM AEST
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| dearest emy, well, im glad your away from him, geez! his loss not yours! no one has the right to be a phychic vampyre, this is so happy and upbeat, im happy for you, big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:00:23 AM AEST
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I'm so glad to read this, grrlfriend...he didn't deserve you....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by venkat on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:31:54 AM AEST
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| you're totally free...that's good..well written. venkat |
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 06:06:43 AM AEST
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believe in yourself and stand strong...good write
Shari |
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Re: PLAYGROUND ON MY MIND
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by Crow on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:44:15 PM AEST
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| no one need that, so glad your good. Crow |
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