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Hearts
Contributed by
trippendicular
on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:21:44 PM in AEST
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I'm doing it again,
Drawing hearts on my papers.
It's been almost a year,
Heartbroken, lost, confused
I thought I would never
Draw hearts again.
Rejected by the one
Who always brought
Joy to my day.
This time it's different.
I liked him first.
No influences, no guilt, no regrets.
Just the thought of him
Makes me giggle,
Like a school girl
With her first crush.
I can picture us,
Walking, talking, laughing,
Holding hands,
I can't believe
I'm doing it again,
Drawing hearts
Everywhere
Copyright ©
trippendicular
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2003-10-10 22:21:44]
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Re: Hearts
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:28:34 PM AEST
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beautifully done, it's nice to feel all giddy about someone, your poem really makes me feel the giddyness.
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Re: Hearts
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:08:27 AM AEST
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Luv it!!
Makes me wonna feel giddy again.
Very good and creative!
It really says a lot!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Hearts
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:50:26 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this...reminded me of the times I've felt this way... Just beautiful...
Jenni |
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Re: Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:51:59 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comment on my poem this is a very nice poem. I remember drawing hearts and writing a guy's name over and over,
Nawtee_One. |
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Re: Hearts
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by TheWildBeliever on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:38:57 AM AEST
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| for an eight minute poem, its really not so bad! |
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