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SO ENDS MY FINAL ACT
Contributed by
ell_03
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 07:13:33 PM in AEST
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IN THE DARKNESS OF MY TOMB
I FEEL THE SENSE OF DOOM
IN MY DEEP DARK GRAVE
I FEEL THE WALLS AROUND ME START TO CAVE
IM TRAPPED WITHIN THIS PLACE
IN A WOODEN CASE
I CANT BE DEAD,NOT ME
I ONLY HAD ONE SMOKE CANT YOU SEE
MY WORLD GOES BLACK
SO ENDS MY FINAL ACT
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2003-10-10 19:13:33]
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Re: SO ENDS MY FINAL ACT
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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Well written...in a morbid way...
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Re: SO ENDS MY FINAL ACT
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:44:55 PM AEST
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Dear Ell,
This was definitely your last write if in that box you find yourself,
and then it's also caving in,
Yes, dear friend, I would say you are dead.
or perhaps this is how you feel when you smoke whatever it is you smoke...anyway,
I felt it was a real, truthful write Ell....And yes I liked the ending too.
So Ends my final Act!
Wonderful
Lovingcritters
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Re: SO ENDS MY FINAL ACT
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:04:06 PM AEST
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| powerful poem. i think the fact that it was written in capital form was atested to that. you had very nice rhymes that didnt seem forced at all. well sometimes it takes only one thing to kill you... |
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