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Daddy Dear
Contributed by
XoXextremesk8ergrlXoX
on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:44:23 PM in AEST
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Daddy dear
I hate you so
I hate you more
than you'll ever know
I hope at night that you can't sleep
to live with the truth you're a major creep
I wish you don't exist but you do
Daddy dear I hope you die
and I bet no one will even cry
because they all hate you too
but not as much as I do...
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2003-10-10 16:44:23]
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Re: Daddy Dear
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by Merry on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:04:48 PM AEST
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well it's good you can get it off your chest - hate is a strong word - sometimes parents make an awful mess of things and they really don't mean to - but i know where you're coming from - i didn't have a very good relationship with either of mine - i treat my dogs better - but i don't hate them anymore - forgiveness comes with age i guess.
enjoyed your poem, and it is good that you can write about it and get it our of your system
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Re: Daddy Dear
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:36:04 AM AEST
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| let it all go......good for you!!! |
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Re: Daddy Dear
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by trippendicular on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:37:15 AM AEST
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Whoa, Very strong. but very good. I liked it!!
Meg |
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