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Her
Contributed by
XoXextremesk8ergrlXoX
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:40:46 PM in AEST
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I see the way you look at her
when she walks in the door
I feel like I am nothing
I can't take it anymore
Whenever you're around her
I notice how you stare
but I have feelings too ya know
but maybe you dont care
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Re: Her
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:35:43 PM AEST
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you dont actualy understand how much a agree with you on this. i'm in the same situaltion, my 2 best friends are going out. i lso wrote alot of poems about this. one of them is called Grey Middle. please read it and tell me what you think...i love writing sad hate poems. my email address is stalph107@telkomsa.net .......just if you want to email me and talk or tell me what you think:
I’m not black and I’m not white,
I’m simply in the middle.
I’m the one they always run to,
I’m the one they always blame.
I’m just stuck in the middle,
I’m the little bit of gray.
I’m the shade that’s in the middle,
I’m the little bit that’s mutual.
You have to pass me,
You have to go through.
I’m simply there,
I’m permanently stuck in the middle.
Black comes running,
And so does white,
They meet and clash,
And war brakes out.
Me being the little bit of gray
I get stuck in the middle.
I don’t judge,
I simply listen and discuss.
Nor do I deceive and betray.
I don’t turn away neither of the colours.
Nor do I discuss the other.
Though being the little bit of gray,
The small mutual colour,
I seem to always get blamed,
Though both sides are aware of the situation.
My only disadvantage is that I can’t run away.
I’m always going to be stuck in the middle.
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Re: Her
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by trippendicular on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 11:11:08 PM AEST
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| Wow. That's totally an emotion I've felt before. It's so amazing when you realize that people feel the same things you do! |
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Re: Her
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:34:58 AM AEST
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| you are in such a difficult emotionally charged situation.......stay true to yourself.....in times like that.....listen to yourself........ |
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