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Daydream
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 02:57:19 PM in AEST
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I never could find the words to write,
how seductive the touch,
the toss of your hair.
Eluded world,
gentle heartbeat,
we are so close, a passion raging.
Essence of the woman,
we warm us from the cold,
most of all as you rest yourself
so close, just a breath apart.
Trust and love I see from your eyes,
I never could find the words......Crow
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Re: Daydream
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 03:05:50 PM AEST
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Loved this, Crow...:>)
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Re: Daydream
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by norm on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:05:16 PM AEST
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A gentle, sweet and loving poem
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Your feelings you have put in words,
For all of us to read,
It seems you love this female fair,
Love her lots, indeed... |
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Re: Daydream
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:28:46 PM AEST
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well written beautiful words, enjoyed reading
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Re: Daydream
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 01:19:53 AM AEST
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| mmm very sweet, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Daydream
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:22:01 AM AEST
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| essence of the woman........i like that :) |
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Re: Daydream
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by venkat on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 03:37:49 AM AEST
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"we warm us from the cold" ..very nice...
if don't misunderstand me..I love to read one more line "we cool us from the heat"
..o.k poem is well written crow. venkat
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Re: Daydream
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by Merry on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:03:48 PM AEST
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ah but you've found the words now.....very romantic
merry |
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Re: Daydream
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:06:49 AM AEST
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"most of all as you rest yourself
so close, just a breath apart."
These are the words Crow...just absolutely gorgeous :)
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