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Depressive Depression
Contributed by
Saira
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:38:16 AM in AEST
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In an ireful sea of depression,
Boat of suppressed wishes sinking,
Wishes that were stifled…
Before even wished, slowly I’m fading.
Tides are rising higher and higher,
Frantically seeking their way out of me.
Making my insides quake,
Darkening the color of agony.
Shall I dig a hole in my forsaken soul…
To let it out?
If do, I would be dead,
If not, I would be a living dead girl!
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-10-10 10:38:16]
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by norm on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:45:31 AM AEST
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Your style is to be admired
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There has to be a better way,
to undepress yourself to day,
Keep looking for the route to joy,
Might simply be a brand new boy... |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 11:40:48 AM AEST
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Your poem is remarkable Saira.
I hope this really is not you,
But if it is dear, I know how much you lean on your creator....take it all to him...leave it with him....he will pull you through!
Love you,
ConSue |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by Crow on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:16:34 PM AEST
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a tough place to be, and it can get worse. you stay strong life changes every minute.
Crow |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by Zee on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:54:17 PM AEST
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Thats sad but very nicely written! The way u have expressed is remarkable!! Good write!
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:07:07 PM AEST
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sad emotions expressed in a beautiful way. sometimes in ur poetry i find feelings we all go thro at times but dont say it out loud. :)
love-----Nida |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by jaeann on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:43:32 PM AEST
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| stay strong......... |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 07:47:20 PM AEST
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| It seems to be coming from inside me, how true can't live without letting things go, can't live either if let it go entirely. --- kj ( another crab;) |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:01:47 PM AEST
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| It seems to be coming from inside me, how true can't live without letting things go, can't live either if let it go entirely. --- kj ( another crab hididng under a rock most of time, then making a dash for it;) |
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Re: Depressive Depression
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by PoeticReign on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 10:02:15 PM AEST
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| I like this one, Saira. "Darkening the color of agony" -- great line!! great metaphor! Please tell me what you think of one i just posted called "The Abyss". thanks! |
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