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Armageddon
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:04:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Death to us all, laughing while the angels fall,
I see their wings consumed by flames, fore evil has a name,
I wade through the ashes of love, all the while raining tears of blood,
Washed in sin, let darkness begin,
Can you hear the rattling of bones, I enjoy being alone,
Hate flows through my veins, my soul has been stained,
The smile on my face is from this horrid place,
Another life has failed, the air here is stale,
In the eyes of the beholder, I am death's soldier,
My soul already gone, and you dare ask me what's wrong,
Well look into your heart, has it been torn apart,
Fore mine has been taken, now I'm left forsaken,
Acid tears burn my face, scars of pain left to replace,
Look into my eyes, watch as my soul dies,
I'm beyond the point of no return, smiling as the world burns,
The gift of death I look to achieve, but the prize always eludes me,
I feast on the souls of the damned, grant me the power to destroy this land,
The center of darkness, a human shell that's heartless,
Bodies at rest, accepting her cold caress,
I'm bringing Armageddon to the door steps of heaven.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Armageddon
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 11:54:42 AM AEST
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| If you could get the love of jesus in your heart you would be writing poetry like this....your a wondeful person he made.dont let this dark poetry take you away..you let it come into your mind your poetry yes is fine but i know that you are not gray.your writing oh wow can it be if you could have some life put in..wonder how great it would be....i bet i would bye a book from thee........my thoughts..no judgement...but wow you can really right but i dont have darkness in myheart and im afraid if i wrote like you do i would have darkness spreading in every part of my life cause i SPEAK IT INTO BEING LIKE THE BIBLE SAYS...WATCH WHAT YOU SAY ..THE TONGUE SPEAKS LIFE AND DEATH....SPEAK LOVE AND HAPPINESS AND GOD AND ANGELS...SEEK AND YOU SHALL FIND..love sandy |
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Re: Armageddon
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 06:59:23 PM AEST
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a little darker than I prefer but as always well
written...
Shari |
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Re: Armageddon
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by jaeann on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:39:05 PM AEST
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| very very good.......vampiric feel to it.....i like the line....the smile on my face is from this horrid place...... |
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Re: Armageddon
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:10:22 AM AEST
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| Oooh, chilling stuff ... very well written .. .Jan |
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Re: Armageddon
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 01:18:42 AM AEST
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| very interesting.... excellent dark write dear phantom:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Armageddon
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:53:14 PM AEST
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I thought this was a very interesting write.
As a student of the Bible for over 40 years,
I know there is going to be an Armaggedon for sure, and it's very close indeed! No one knows the day nor the hour....but how can mankind go on like this? If there is no intervention soon, man would be gone, killed by his own hand!
Armaggedon is God's War, we will have no part....he's a reader of your heart!
Great interesting write....I enjoyed reading it, because I know for sure that Armaggedon is Imminent keep it in your sight!
lovingcritters
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Re: Armageddon
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by PoeticReign on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:02:50 AM AEST
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OMG Phantom... this is amazing! it moves me deeply... there's so much in this poem. I have to read it several more times! This is a great display of your talent... way to go!
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