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The Starry Night Feeling
Contributed by
Twitch06
on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:26:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As we look at the dark blue sky,
We see shooting stars fly.
Then the clouds float by.
Now I cant see that sparkle in your eye,
But you can still see mine.
Now since I cant find the sparkle in your
eyes. We watch the clouds as they disapper,
and the stars show through out the rest of
the night. As we close our eyes and lock our
lips, I find that sparkle within you.
As we look at the dark blue sky again,
We see shooting stars and wish on them.
Still no clouds in our view.
Now I know that sparkle in your eye is new.
My wish upon that shooting star, was to be
with you.
Copyright ©
Twitch06
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2003-10-10 09:26:11]
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Re: The Starry Night Feeling
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by Jacquelynne on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:41:46 AM AEST
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| AWWW, this is cute. I really like it. I like it so much. good job twitch. Do you graduate in 06? I am 05! |
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Re: The Starry Night Feeling
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:33:06 PM AEST
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Awww..this is so sweet..... Liked it a lot..
Jenni |
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Re: The Starry Night Feeling
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by jaeann on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:32:12 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet.......great work!!!! i can see the stars......the velvety night..... |
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Re: The Starry Night Feeling
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by garyh on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 03:10:41 PM AEST
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| great write... probably one of the best i have read in a while... keep up the work, you are very good and still very young.. you will be a great writer someday im sure |
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