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Peace Keeper
Contributed by
jaeann
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Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:47:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Far off in the distance stands a fearless rogue by night.
Cruising ground in search of what he glimpsed at his last sight.
She was running throught the trees, he caught her silhouette within the light.
He reached for her, yet fumbled, glanced her eye, she stood in fright.
If he were to capture her, upon his hearth rug she would lay.
But she's deep inside the forest and cannot be coaxed out today.
He does not remember her, the same girl he once did play.
If he saw her closer still, he'd recognize he had pushed her away.
The sun does best to hide from her, only shadows cross her wall.
She'd rather be there than on his shelf, for in her cocoon she'll not fall.
Someday when he discovers her, lost inside the fortress tall.
He shall take heed to watch over her, for in his absence, far she will crawl.
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Re: Peace Keeper
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:54:46 AM AEST
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| oh jaeann, your poetry is just sooo beautiful, its breathtaking, more please! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Peace Keeper
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:08:51 AM AEST
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Kinda scary Jaymee, but beautifully written, I was right there....trying to figure how to get out!
Love you,ConSue |
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Re: Peace Keeper
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by Crow on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:50:29 AM AEST
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super write, you always have me working.
Crow |
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Re: Peace Keeper
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 08:30:40 AM AEST
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I really liked this one a lot
Moved me to the soul
Shari |
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Re: Peace Keeper
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 04:25:29 PM AEST
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Dear Jaeann,
This is so beautiful . I just don't know
how you do it, but please keep doing it!
Love Ya,
Lynn |
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