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Storm
Contributed by
crow
on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:26:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I need to hide this heart away,
to keep it safe form the storm still passing.
Clouded thoughts of a life that
still should be, no higher price
we have to offer.
Greater love has no man,
we would give all and take their place.
The storm brews unending....... Crow
Copyright ©
crow
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2003-10-09 23:26:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:27:20 PM AEST (User
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words so very true
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:30:07 PM AEST (User
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Sigh...this touched me to the core of my being, Crow..thanks..
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:49:00 PM AEST (User
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ahhhhh....you touched my heart...thank you!!!! |
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:07:12 AM AEST (User
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awww............ |
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:22:36 AM AEST (User
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My heart just crashed to the bottom of my toes.That's as far as it goes! Wonderful!
Lovingcritters
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:37:48 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful, and very touching! |
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 04:55:41 PM AEST (User
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so stark and so true....as always your writing touches the very element of being human
merry |
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Re: Storm
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 04:13:06 AM AEST (User
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You're a dear kind man with an ever gentle soul.. (((Crow))) This write held yours and brought forth mine..and many readers I imagine (tears) |
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