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Conceal The Deal And Make It Real
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:18:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting here, concentrating on you
Trees blowing, rain dripping down the window sill
Catch it, bring down and make it real
You hold something true don't conceal it
So let's lay on my bed...hold each other close
I'll kiss you like I mean it I won't ever leave your side
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tbsbikescene
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2003-10-09 21:18:09]
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Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:28:19 PM AEST
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| love the poem to pieces...also love taking back sunday :) awesome write |
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Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:28:26 PM AEST
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| love the poem to pieces...also love taking back sunday :) awesome write |
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Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real
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by jaeann on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 12:02:09 AM AEST
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| god.....i wish he'd read me.....i wish he'd say these things.........ah may be someday!!!!! |
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Re: Conceal The Deal And Make It Real
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:38:15 PM AEST
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Lovely write... nice picture you've painted..
Jenni |
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