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One Last Time
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 01:37:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Is it to much to ask of you?
I just want you to love me...
Not some unfathomable force,
Just the way that you loved me before
When you kissed all the tears away from my face
And held me all night long,
All those long rides in your car together,
All those long walks
As we numbered the stars
And talked about our plans for the future
Planning out how to make them fit
Into one another's lives.
Such a short time that lasted for an eternity,
Is it too much to ask of you,
Just to try that...
One last time?
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ginsdance
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2002-08-19 13:37:34]
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Re: One Last Time
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 05:24:29 PM AEST
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| i Have had to play the what if game in the past.. sad to say i simply gave up playing in the end... now i have moved on and i am so much more happier than i have been in the past months... great write |
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Re: One Last Time
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by Chrissie on
Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 05:32:12 PM AEST
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A very poignant piece Gin. as always you write with much maturity.
Love Chrissie x |
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