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Prove It
Contributed by
lgcmusic
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:20:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You say you're lucky to have found me
I'm everything you want and more
Just what you were looking for
You are sweet and complement me
But I need to know for sure
I can't just give in and say I'm yours
Is it wrong to wonder if it's just a line?
You'll need to prove to me your mine
And baby, that times time...
Yes, I want to feel loved
Want to cling to my white knight
And who can blame me for praying that he's you?
So I wish will all my might
Every day and every night
Baby, prove to me that he's you
Some think flattery gets you where you want
But baby, not with me
Has to be more than saying I like what I see
Just be real and don't use a front
And stop the pleasant reveries
I need to know that you'll be down for me
Baby, just be honest and I'll ask you one more time
Will you prove to me that you're really mine?
Yes, I want to feel loved
Want to cling to my white knight
And who can blame me for praying that he's you?
So I wish will all my might
Every day and every night
Baby, prove to me that he's you
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Re: Prove It
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:37:39 PM AEST
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very nicely done! I especially like the way you rhymed this. The want of a true love is universal my friend....no games, no fronts,just real honest love. Well done!
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Re: Prove It
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:39:11 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem and can relate to it. everyone is looking for true love, and when you find it, you pray and hope that it will last forever and that he/she will always be true to you. especially after having so much bad luck in love and being trampled on so many times, when you find someone you can't trust them until you know that all they are saying is real. Anyway that's how it is for me.
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