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an old poem about an old girlfriend
Contributed by
Paul
on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why am I the lucky one?
But I feel like something is wrong,
Seems like everything is at my fingertips,
But I can’t find anything to get a hold on,
I don’t have a bad life,
In fact some would say I’m spoiled,
But I feel so disappointed,
And it seems one after the other my plans are foiled,
Maybe I shouldn’t plan,
But it’s hard when you’re a dreamer,
You always want the best things,
Always want to be the winner,
I don’t think I will ever stop my hope,
And who knows maybe someday,
She’ll come back to me.
Copyright ©
Paul
... [
2003-10-09 20:19:56]
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Re: an old poem about an old girlfriend
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by lgcmusic on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:30:18 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet...I liked it. |
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Re: an old poem about an old girlfriend
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:48:44 PM AEST
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| HEY. I LIKE THIS AND IT'S TRUE ALL THE WAY |
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Re: an old poem about an old girlfriend
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by Zee on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:50:06 PM AEST
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This looks like a self talk in the mirror!! Its indeed very nice & true!! Good write!!
Zee |
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