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The pain within
Contributed by
hope
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 06:59:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You cant stand your own skin
You think if only I could break free
Escape from the weights on my feet
The pain flows through your veins
Floating beneath your skin
Feeling it in every part of you
Eating at your skin
Tearing at your flesh
It travels to your heart
And takes on the deepest part
It rips and it breaks
Pulling all your feelings apart
Till theirs just no more pain it can take
That’s when your skin begins to crawl
Your bones begin to shake
Something inside of you just trying to escape
You open it up hoping to set it free
But really its darkness covering thee
He makes you think it’ll disappear
He makes you think that no one will care
You think to yourself …if only they knew
The pain that I’ve felt
They would know why I slice myself
But that is his hold on you
He makes you think you can’t make it through
And then he whispers “theirs no one here for you”
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hope
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Re: The pain within
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 08:02:44 PM AEST
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| awesome write!!!!! the pain you convey is so real!!!! |
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Re: The pain within
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 08:48:31 PM AEST
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Very real, very emotional and something I to have struggled with I hope u have beaten your SI and I hope you realize ppl do care. Very good poem.
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Re: The pain within
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 07:57:06 AM AEST
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Goodness, you do know the power of evil. You've shown that well here.
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