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~Free~
Contributed by
Cookie
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Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 03:37:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I am brave I am strong
you thought i was weak
you were wrong
I am not fragile
I will not break
I'll keep my head up high
and find my own place
I am now flying without a weight.
I've lost it all happiness and hate.
I need something to keep me holding on
I'm sick of trying
This has been going on for too long
So this I learned and I want you to hear
I can't be with you
I profoundly say I don't want you near.
I'd never take you back
It's in the past I'm glad it did end
and i'm free at last
I am brave I am strong
you are weak
i was wrong
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Cookie
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Re: ~Free~
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by Saira on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 03:45:16 PM AEST
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Welcome Cookie :o)
"I am now flying without a weight." I liked this line. Great write...well done!
Saira
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Re: ~Free~
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by hope on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:05:24 PM AEST
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| awesomely put.....i think this is one of the hardest things to be free from. |
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Re: ~Free~
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by venkat on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:23:25 AM AEST
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| well done. venkat |
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