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3 Growth Haiku
Contributed by
thatabbygirl
on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Laughter erupts
over a
Fischer Price phone.
Phone in trembling hand,
I feel
his heart break.
Starving for
home cooking
I pick up the phone.
Copyright ©
thatabbygirl
... [
2003-10-08 23:00:43]
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Re: 3 Growth Haiku
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:25:02 PM AEST
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| sorry to tell you but this is not true haiku. it has a good flow tho. |
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Re: 3 Growth Haiku
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by thatabbygirl on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:41:31 PM AEST
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Actually modern Haiku can be 2-4 lines, with up to 17 syllables and it doesn't have to follow the 5-7-5 meter.
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Re: 3 Growth Haiku
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:55:21 PM AEST
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| Okay. thanks for the info. I guess I'm too ancient to know that. I 'precaite it. |
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Re: 3 Growth Haiku
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by norm on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:50:04 AM AEST
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Your haiku was read..
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I cannot comment on a style so new
You might want to start to legally sue
In a witness chair, I wouldn't dare
To defend myself with what I knew..
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