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....needs a title....
Contributed by
hoping_to_be_me
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Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 10:34:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Don't let the sun rise to find your eyes all full of tears for me
Don't hurt the way you did today
Don't think of all those things you didn't get to say
Don't let go inside your heart
Don't let us ever be apart
Don't forget how much I love you
Don't forget I think about you too
Remember that it won't end like this
Remember we'll share that hug and that kiss
Remember our love is here to stay
Remember your dreams, don't push them away
Remember right where I'll be
Remember I'll be smiling in your arms, laying happily
Hold onto the days
Hold onto yesterday
Hold onto the good and the bad
Hold onto the love we have
Hold onto everything you said but didn't say
Hold on knowing I love you anyway
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Re: ....needs a title....
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by Uncooked on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 10:44:13 PM AEST
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-"Don't Forget to Hold ON" (combines all three words that open each standza ('don't forget' also means 'remember'))
-"Tips to Loving Me"
-"My Proposal"
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Re: ....needs a title....
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by Kalika on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 12:14:46 AM AEST
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how about...... I'll love you anyway
nice write
Kali |
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Re: ....needs a title....
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 03:02:34 AM AEST
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Beuatiful write.
Not sure about a title...that is a tricky one. I find it difficult enough to get a title for my own poems. Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: ....needs a title....
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:47:32 AM AEST
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how about ......HOLD ON
TAKE CARE SANDY |
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Re: ....needs a title....
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 02:49:25 PM AEST
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| Nice write... as for the title, Kalika said what I was going to. |
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