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Egotistical Glory
Contributed by
Dragons_Of_Rose
on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 07:52:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Egotistical Glory
Voiding away from nightly calls to evade all that’s changed
The man my heart loves now subsist within you no more
I once thought miracles happened and we’d somehow be saved
But now I sit and wonder what exactly my hearts fighting for.
Your words and silent gestures tell their own story
One of independence and a life that contains not I
But the wants and desires of your egotistical glory
And the truth of your intentions safely tucked behind your lies.
You’ll still smile and marvel in your foolish greedy pride
Your weekly days will go on unmarked and unrestricted
While I’ll drown in the remnants of all that has died
And the continuous pain your actions have afflicted.
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Dragons_Of_Rose
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2003-10-08 19:52:48]
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Re: Egotistical Glory
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by EternitysLyre on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 04:47:18 AM AEST
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I must say, this poem is a bit lengthy for my tastes, but nonetheless satisfying in depth and profound in emotion. By nature i prefer more consistent rythm, though; i read my poems a few times over to make sure the rythm is there.
Rhyme and Rhythm go together, and your rhyme is great, but the rythm is off sometimes. Read it yourself...you'll get what i mean. |
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Re: Egotistical Glory
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by Archie on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:21:15 AM AEST
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| I hope you are doing better now. |
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