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The Poet's Cry
Contributed by
jaavys
on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 01:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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A poem into the northern sky
Is shot from freedom's cannon
That you may read as it goes by
The words of John the Lennon
A poem is the ammunition
Once more unto the breach
A thousand poems light the sky
Your heart should be besieged
Surrender! There is no condition
This war is being waged
And witness this an extradition
Few words will be exchanged
Beware, it is an apparition
Up in the northern sky
The winds of war! A vision
Oh hear the poet's cry
Copyright ©
jaavys
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2003-10-08 13:15:22]
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Re: The Poet's Cry
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by Philipa on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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Jaavys this is really well done. From the first stanza to the last you held my attention and every word fit. I hope you submit this the www.poetsagainstthewar.org, you may find it published the next day.
Philipa |
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Re: The Poet's Cry
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 02:25:37 PM AEST
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| great poem my friend, love this one:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Poet's Cry
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 06:42:58 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem ... very well written ... Jan |
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