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To a Great Friend
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:22:46 AM in AEST
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The greatest pain
The deepest loss
Your heart has been stained
You now carry a cross
My own heart cries
I wish to be there
To hug, hold you tight
Your burdens and tears, to share
My words I know
Can't cure your pain
I just wish to show
My friendship's not in vain
Think of where
She must be now
No fear or care
Before God, she bows
All things that happen
Are all for the best
Amy, you'll see her again
In the Eternal Rest
Amy, I love you
As a brother should
If I could be there
You know I would
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2003-10-08 11:22:46]
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Re: To a Great Friend
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 11:25:52 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful.... hope you've shown it to her... :) |
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Re: To a Great Friend
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by Philipa on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 01:42:24 PM AEST
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Most sad and well written. I agree with the above comment, show your friend Amy the poem.
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Re: To a Great Friend
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 06:35:37 PM AEST
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David That was great. Thank you for the poem out of your heart
Katrina |
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Re: To a Great Friend
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by angel1 on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 11:19:53 PM AEST
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| it was excellent and very emotional i loved it i wish i had a friend like you |
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Re: To a Great Friend
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by wolfman on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:39:36 PM AEST
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David my friend, it is me I just wanted to tell you that this is the most emotionaly friend caring poem by you that I'v read. very well done.
and if you havent please do show her and let her know that we will all be praying for her. |
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