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Haihu, Limeric Combo I
Contributed by
norm
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Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 09:46:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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I once knew a guy from Japan
Whose color, the sunlight made tan,
He was blue, he was sad,
He was green, he was mad,
He was tie-dyed, the colors, they ran.
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The sun was assured.
His rival, the rose, had died,
Now, we shall have day...
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norm
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2003-10-08 09:46:38]
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Re: Haihu, Limeric Combo I
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 07:43:08 PM AEST
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Dear Norman,
I've never seen this done before.
I mean the Japenese Haiku,& limerick too!
I thought they were both very nice.
And saved lots of paper for you!
You are very good teacher,
And I want to thank you Sir.
If you are not nice, I'll "filter" you,
And then you'll be just a "blur!
*smiles*
Lovingcritter,
ConSue
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Re: Haihu, Limeric Combo I
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:17:41 PM AEST
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| very nicely done. |
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