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Just Die
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 10:07:27 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Here you are again
searching within
Stuck in your imagined world
your world of pretend.
You look at someone you
you no longer know
Darkness is lurking
no where to go.
You find comfort in pain
cut youself some more
Yell at me for your mistakes
just like before.
Your fake and you wear a mask
at night you cry
You poser your undecided
just freakin die
Give in to the nightmares
stalking your dreams
Give in the the heartache
walking the beams
***** you, your over
face it your done
I knew your game loser
straight from day one!
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2003-10-07 22:07:27]
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Re: Just Die
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 11:31:29 PM AEST
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You find comfort in pain
With you hurtfulness will reign,
I've met so many people such as this
Loving misery they wouldn't miss!
You have explained this person so well,
And today we see so many just like him who love to dwell
on their misery.
They don't want to change...it's to comfortable to remain,
miserable hurting machines that reign!
This poem was exceptional because it was not only a few words, but explained it so well to the reader in such a short period of time.
I read it three times...it was very enjoyable! I like the way you ended it also...he's a loser!
Warm Poetic Love,
Lovingcritters
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Re: Just Die
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by Lele on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 03:15:59 PM AEST
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It's sound a description of a romantic poetry
( romantic by Byron). I like very much the mix that you made the drama with reality. |
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Re: Just Die
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:24:39 AM AEST
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| This is fabulous, a total stab at all the cliche suicidals. Reminds me of a thousand others who are so depressed and want to drag everyone else into their ego centric self loathing. Personally, i despise those who want to drag everyone else into their own self induced darkness, and this poem echoes my sentiments. |
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