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When you Return

Contributed by Twitch06 on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 09:13:48 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

When we met, I thought that everything was alright. But now I see that you're gonna be gone for a while and I know that I will miss you terribly every day and night. I hope you feel the same way as I do when you leave. Everytime that I will look at the stars, I will wish for you to be by me right then and there. I know that we will meet agian when you return. I will never forget you while you're away either, and I hope you won't neither. You are my hopes, you are me dreams, and you are my world. When you return, I will make you happy in all the ways that I can. I know that I will make you happy just for me to be by your side. Ray, I will miss and love you so much while you're gone. I want to be with you till the end of time. I want you here to hold my spirit tight. I want you here to take my breath in when you breathe. I will always remember what you said and did. Whether or not, if you're near or far just remember, there you are. No matter where you go, there you are. I will always remember the way that you are. You are one of a kind to me. I want to be with you till the world collapes. When we met, our love was weak. But after a while, it grew to be strong as it can ever be. If I lost you, my life would end right here and now. When I think of you, I burn inside for your love. You have no idea what you do to me. As other people don't see you perfectly, I do. I see you perfect just as if you ever seen something that you know that was there, and other people didn't see it. When you return I will wait for you to come to me, instead of me coming to you. I think, dream, and wish that you were here with me by my side. I wirte poems for you every chance that I get. The longest ones are for you. So when you return, I will be here waiting for you.

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Re: When you Return (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 09:35:51 AM AEST
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Damn girl this is great. I could say this is long.

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