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Fake
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 02:57:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Everything seems so faded
My memories feel like dreams
I can't tell what's real
And what isn't as it seems
Everything is so distant
Something just doesn't feel right
Something is wrong here
Did I lose my mind last night?
I'm so tired
Wrapped up in self-denial
Sick of this
I feel there's something I've missed
I wish I didn't feel that way
But I can't escape
The pain is so physical
It hurts beyond all feeling
I need some relief
A little bit of healing
Cut my wrist to see it bleed
Close my eyes and cease to breathe
Need something that's real
'Cause I am what you perceive
I'm so fake
Next to you my soul's erased
What you want
Is what I give though it haunts
It follows me all the time
And those words aren't mine
Wake me up
Don't worry if I'm cut up
I love you
That's one thing I know is true
Hope you don't mind I'm not all there
I think you're my prayer
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-10-06 14:57:20]
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Re: Fake
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 03:02:16 PM AEST
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sometimes just putting it on paper
helps it took alot of courage to
put this out there
stay strong
with love
Putter |
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Re: Fake
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by norticus on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 04:10:00 PM AEST
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| Meow, meow, meow. 3.5 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Fake
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by Merry on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 04:47:50 PM AEST
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ah moonlit
hopefully this feeling will pass - and things will look brighter.
hugs
merry |
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Re: Fake
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:02:49 PM AEST
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I'm sorry you feel this way, Moonlit... you shuldn't have to pretend to feel what you don't. Hope this is temporary..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Fake
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 12:49:48 AM AEST
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Oh My!!!! I loved this poem...I can so relate...it's so painful...I hope that you get your prayer. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Fake
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 02:17:11 AM AEST
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| oh dear, big hugs and love dee, im always here for you, you know, nessa x |
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