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GOD, IM SCARED
Contributed by
Putteragain
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Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:31:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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Always in pain
controlled by my vein
In surch for a cure
my emotions stir
Try reaching out
I scream I shout
Upon deaf ears
does noone hear
Then a door opens
others are copin
Just like me
only they are free
Tears are shed
wounds are bled
Hope is shared
GOD im scared
hope is out there
PUTTER
Copyright ©
Putteragain
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2003-10-06 13:31:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: GOD, IM SCARED
(User Rating: 1 ) by norticus on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 04:15:30 PM AEST (User
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This one's really narly. It had a cool beat that I could really dance to. I gave it a 4.6 on the Nortiscale. Is it about Cancer? |
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Re: GOD, IM SCARED
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 08:24:11 PM AEST (User
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I liked this not really a limerick though. Some of the rhymes seemed kind of forced but it was good nonetheless.
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Re: GOD, IM SCARED
(User Rating: 1 ) by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 01:16:59 PM AEST (User
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This was'nt meant to be a limrick |
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Re: GOD, IM SCARED
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:19:18 PM AEST (User
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well great non limerick then =] |
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