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Don't Forget
Contributed by
RealCrystal
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Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:21:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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On the day when my soul diminishes and my life is finished,
On the day when my spirits' thirst for freedom is finally and forever quenched.
On my dying day remember me.
The wisdom I possessed and my inner beauty.
Remember how strong I was and how I strived to be happy.
To please my friends and family and trying hard to please me.
Remember how I carried my self.
How i would go throught the struggles without any help to better myself.
Just remember all the problems that I dealt with and solved.
Remember how quickly I evolved from shy little girl to bold woman during my childhood, during my lifetime.
Rememebr the way I write, the way me, that caged bird chymed singing a song for peace.
But in the least,
Just don't forget about me.
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RealCrystal
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2003-10-06 13:21:37]
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Re: Don't Forget
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:29:25 PM AEST
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Wow... I was really touched by this. It's absolutely gorgeous. Excellent, excellent write!
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Re: Don't Forget
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by norticus on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 04:16:28 PM AEST
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| Poets are weird. 3.6 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Don't Forget
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:52:43 PM AEST
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| Very touching. Will certainly be reading your other poems. And thanks for the kind words on my own!--the Moth |
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