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Sins
Contributed by
crow
on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A simple story,
not of love gone wrong,
just lost in time,
forgotten whys, ashes cold..
Paying wages,
at a days cost, in it for love,
aware of the heartbreak.
A costly thought you might love again,
held here by my own sins...... Crow
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2003-10-05 20:25:00]
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Re: Sins
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 12:07:24 AM AEST
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as always goes straight to the soul, and leaves an imprint
Shari |
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Re: Sins
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by venkat on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 01:19:18 AM AEST
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| very interesting. venkat |
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Re: Sins
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by jaeann on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:35:13 PM AEST
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| just lost in time.....yes...... great piece!!!!!!! |
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Re: Sins
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by Merry on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 11:02:33 PM AEST
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very strong and soulful write - gets straight to the heart of the matter
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Re: Sins
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by Frillycakes on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 07:43:04 AM AEST
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| Well done, keep writing ;) |
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