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Are We Gonna Be Alright?
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Your silence is killing me
I can't even hide it if I try
I know everybody sees
But I don't think they want to know why
Give up the fight
Talk to me tonight
Tell me we're gonna be alright
Every time I breathe in
The world starts to spin
Every time I breathe out
My head fills with doubt
Every day that goes by
I sit alone and cry
A little part of me dies
I just try to get by
Your silence is deafening
I don't know what you're trying to say
Or what you might be hiding
If you just want me to go away
Bring back the light
Please stop this tonight
I need to know we'll be alright
Every time I breathe in
I'm crying within
Every time I breathe out
My soul screams and shouts
Every night that goes by
I just wish I knew why
Why you won't even try
I will not say goodbye
(Breathe in)
Make my hands stop shaking
(Breathe out)
Make my heart stop aching
Please end this fight
Talk to me tonight
Bring back the light
Are we gonna be alright?
Breathe in...
(My world is spinning, my soul is screaming)
Breathe out...
(My head's full of doubt, I'm crying without)
Breathe in...
Breathe out...
(Your silence kills me)
Are we gonna be alright?
Breathe...
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MoonlitAngel
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2003-10-05 11:35:00]
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Re: Are We Gonna Be Alright?
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 11:43:32 AM AEST
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| Wow....this is really good....I can feel those feelings...well done... |
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Re: Are We Gonna Be Alright?
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by MoreThanNormal on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:28:46 PM AEST
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I Like!
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Re: Are We Gonna Be Alright?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:39:57 PM AEST
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Wow, Moonlit, this was so well done!! Lots of emotions showing in this one... Hope all is well with you..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Are We Gonna Be Alright?
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 02:33:10 PM AEST
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| when my song called dont lean on your own understanding..your mind and eyes are on the one who seek to talk to you....and think of worried things..but look to the lord as it says in this poem keep your mind on him and give him this problem and he will help you through this and even bring you close to the person you care for...........sandy |
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Re: Are We Gonna Be Alright?
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 05:38:29 PM AEST
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| Wow... this is so beautifully written.. I loved it! |
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Re: Are We Gonna Be Alright?
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 05:52:19 PM AEST
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| Such a great poem about real thoughts and real emotions and I liked it! Love:::Kirby |
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