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Weird Eyes
Contributed by
norticus
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Standing in the foyer I happened upon a sight
There inside the looking glass was the subject of my fright
The white shown more so and the black pointed strange
The green had swollen and was circled in purple frangs
In my amazement with the vision I was unaware of pain
The sight was gone yet still there shown this moist and bloody stain
Pushing and jerkin and POPP! to the floor
With a long fleshy tail it squiggled out the door
Again I looked in the looking glass
With one eye I looked like a big dumb***
So I turned on my toe and headed to the yard
Amazed I watch my eye scurry down Henry Blvd.
Then right then, it occurred to me
Why should I chase it? just wants to be free
I followed at a distance to see where it'd go
When suddenly I was blind! My eyes they were no more.
A local boy of thirteen stood by me baffled said
"Holy stuff man! Your eyes popped out of your head!"
Copulating near a stump and looking deep at one another
My eyes made a new eyeball sister and a brother.
Upon the looking glass I saw this sight
I chuckled a bit and said goodnight
jz
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Re: Weird Eyes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:07:42 PM AEST
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Oh me. Very creative!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
With visions like this one I'd have nite mares. |
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Re: Weird Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 02:51:53 PM AEST
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| lol! very clever and imaginative! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Weird Eyes
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 02:01:51 AM AEST
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| I think this is the wierdest poem I have ever read, lol ... but it had me reading it over and over ... very intriguing ... Jan |
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