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Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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So still the night,yet for two in need
A dream bound tight,to be set free
An hour from daybreak,a thought was born
They drove away,in the early morn
To find their wings and journey far
Just him and her in his old car
Then,Holes in the floor of heaven
Dee Warner ,from the radio they hear
Two soft hearts just smiled together
As they wiped each others tears
A beautiful song that pulls at the heart
Brings a strong man to his knees
Makes a woman love him more
For the man they dont often see
Sitting silently by his side
She ponders on ways to find the words
To tell him what her heart has found
Though her soul he's already heard
Winding down the window
The cool morn air blows in
She looks his way and finds his eyes
Reflecting all she feels within
There is no need for talking
All has been said without a sound
And so they make their journey
To a place on higherground
Up the side of a pine wooded hill
Together they climbed holding hands
To await a beautiful sunrise
And share in the view of the land
Still in silence,they journeyed
Taking in natures own breath
As one they became in the moment
And would still be this way in death
For eagles cried out around them
Calling to spirits of old
This love they bring to the mountain
Will one day be a story told
And so as they walked near dawning
A blessing was cast on the two
For now,forever and afterwards
May these lovers remain ever true
Reaching the heights of their journey
They found a cool place to rest
He with his arms around her
She with her head on his chest
Then came the moment they'd awaited
So softly she opened her eyes
And cast forth upon the wilderness
A beautiful warm amber sigh
Spread far and wide across valleys
Shimmering on rivers and streams
The most glorious of natures tapestries
The dance of morning sunbeams
They stood and gave praise to the spirits
Touched what was one out of reach
And now that two hearts came full circle
As one they would love for each
Many moons passed for these two lovers
Every sunrise and sunset was shared
Together they'd sit through their lifetime
Silent yet knowing each cared
Time has a way of passing
And so came the day of their death
For just as he passed over
She held his hand and took her last breath
They flew in the early morns mist
And climbed the pine wooded hills
And there every sunrise and sunset
They are found in silence still
Eagles cry out around them
Calling to spirits of old
The love they brought to this mountain
Will always be a story told
And so as they walked near dawning
A blessing was cast on the two
For now,forever and afterwards
These lovers remain ever true
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LovingWhispers
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2003-10-04 20:25:00]
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:35:15 PM AEST
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This is wonderful ::sighs:: I loved it
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:38:06 PM AEST
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| Geez people what can I say?? Im a blondie..big time lol..Not Dee warner.Its meant to be Steve Warner..so sorry..(grumbles) ;) |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:40:16 PM AEST
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What a heart melting write! The images you give the reader and always breathtakingly beautiful, My hat is in my hand and the other is tossing roses. :o)
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:32:16 PM AEST
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There just arn't words enuff 2 unfold the beauty in this write.
Heavenly!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:28:54 AM AEST
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| dearest sharon, this is so beautiful and yes, very romantic, reminds me of a lot of the indian legends around here, there was a story of two lovers who became trees side by side, and their branches entertwined:) arent legends and stories wonderful? yours truely is here!! thanks for taking me 'away' love, woofies and huggers nessa xxx |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 01:23:35 AM AEST
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| what a beautiful love story, that captures the heart. Crow |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by venkat on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 02:29:36 AM AEST
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A beautiful love story..entire poem is very sweet..these lines just captivating..
"So softly she opened her eyes
And cast forth upon the wilderness
A beautiful warm amber sigh
Spread far and wide across valleys
Shimmering on rivers and streams
The most glorious of natures tapestries
The dance of morning sunbeams
They stood and gave praise to the spirits"
great job..venkat
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 05:21:34 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh this is amazing. It brought a mile to my face and warmed my heart. This is such a breathtaking, beautiful write. You really have a way with words.
Stacey |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 07:25:21 AM AEST
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| your good with words but come on grow up. you take other womens husbands with no consideration of children involved you are the lowest of the low. You scrape the bottum of the barrel. Miss try to act pure and holy and ever so sweet. Roses at your feet for deceit. |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 08:20:45 AM AEST
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by Anonymous on Monday, October 06 2003 @ 07:25:21 CDT
your good with words but come on grow up. you take other womens husbands with no consideration of children involved you are the lowest of the low. You scrape the bottum of the barrel. Miss try to act pure and holy and ever so sweet. Roses at your feet for deceit.
LMAO..You cow!!! Do yourself a favour,get off your busy body backside,go to the corner store and get yourself a personality...my shout.Even one from a bubblegum machine would top the one you have now.Miss anonymous....you are the one who needs to grow up..who in their right mind(adult mind) would waste time searching out my writes just to be like this...lol!!! Im not sure if its you dette or its your hillbilly friend Charlotte but I dont really care...cause everyone knows I didnt take anyones husband..he left!And even now after our breakup...he still wont go back.He knows the freedom of a good happy life now..no nagging,no screaming and he gets a hot meal after a hard days work..not hotdogs 3 nights in a row.Give it up..get a life..and as for hurting the kids..maybe dette needs to pull up on screaming at him in front of them..tsk tsk tsk..and as for you Charlotte..you need to seriously get yourself some lovin hun,Im sure a good orgasm will lighten you up a bit .
MY APOLOGIES HERE TO THE READERS HAVING TO READ THIS CRAP,HERS AND MINE,AND IM SORRY FOR THE REMARK ABOUT THE ORGASM,BUT IM SURE YOU WILL ALL AGREE IM RIGHT LOL ;) |
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Re: Blessed Be The Sunrise Lovers
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by Merry on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:12:47 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem - sounds like a legend - great imagery.
you did a great job and i enjoyed reading your work
merry |
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