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my best friend ....my lost toy
Contributed by
M2003UK
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I like you because your bringed me joy
even though you was only a toy
I like you because you are my friend who's always ready for a mend
I hate you because you was never there and you knew thats all I feared
I hate you because you was everything I ever shared
I hate you because you always steared like you never cared
I love you because now you are lost
and that is the biggest cost
I love you because I always shared that made me popular and people care
I love you because its just not fair you was the only person who was always there
and now your gone and I'm all torn just like you when you was born.....
Copyright ©
M2003UK
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2003-10-04 18:35:00]
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Re: my best friend ....my lost toy
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 07:05:16 PM AEST
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Hmm an interesting write...
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Re: my best friend ....my lost toy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 03:24:41 PM AEST
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| this is gud but i dont quite understand it may b thats y its poerty |
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