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The Sacred Fruit
Contributed by
garyh
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sacred fruit of your soul was lost
Taken unrightfully, stolen
It hurt immensely
You shared the holiness with others
To rid the raunch treachery
Then met a man who treated you horribly
Abused you, hit you, took control of you
I came and pleased you
Treated you well, made you happy
Shared our thoughts
Entered each others minds
We talked about memories
Things we had
Things we want
What we need
We laughed
Cried
Smiled
The love we had
The love we have
I want to be with you till the end
I want to give you my fruit
And share my wine
For you are my girl
My love
My heart
My soul
Copyright ©
garyh
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2003-10-04 17:05:00]
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Re: The Sacred Fruit
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:39:48 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem... You opened your heart and love for her to see..... Awesome poem! |
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Re: The Sacred Fruit
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 06:42:00 PM AEST
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Awwww...She is one lucky gal to have found someone who allowed her in and respected her. Great write.Nicely done!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: The Sacred Fruit
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:02:06 AM AEST
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| awww.... "I want to give you my fruit and share my wine"... that's beautiful... :) |
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Re: The Sacred Fruit
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by Monkeybones99 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:13:10 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem shares a nice part of yourself.....keep up the great writing. |
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