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Out my life forever
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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How could something so beautiful turn so bad
How could someone i love make me mad
why do i lose all i gain
or seem to spend my life in pain
i wonder do you hate me or just pray
that my life is hell everyday
was i your experiment for you to see
just how much hurt you can throw at me
what is it with you, i dreamed you were great
but you have made my love turn into hate
I cant take no more what dont you get
out of my life its you i regret
to be honest in my eyes
all your love was only lies
i dont understand what dont you get
Im starting to wish we never met.
i cant help but feel a fool
sometimes your just cruel
If i had been givin a wish
i would take back our very first kiss
I wouldnt have given you my heart
for you to rip and tear apart
I cant do this i cant lie
im glad that you just walked by
Cause now we are not together
Im glad your out my life forever
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Re: Out my life forever
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by norticus on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:50:37 AM AEST
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| I liked this. Written good and plenty of heart. I give this a 4.5 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Out my life forever
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by norticus on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 10:54:32 AM AEST
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| I'm glad too. If you hadn't kissed then you wouldn't have written this and then I couldn't have enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your pain. I give this a 4.5 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Out my life forever
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by Candi on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 12:37:07 AM AEST
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| i give this poem a 5. reading it brought tears to my eyes. it has so much feeling and emotion. it brought back so many memories. i know it hurts to go through this kind of situation, but just look at it as inspiration for you, your anger and pain caused you to write a beautiful poem. all things happen for a reason, and maybe thats why that happened, to inspire your true talent. i cant wait to find more of your poems to read. |
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