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Smile
Contributed by
lil_angel_eyes
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
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A few good things make life seem worthwhile
One of them things is seeing you smile.
I know that life for us has never been simple
I miss watchin you smile with you cute little dimple.
Im hopin tomorrow as we both start a new day
That life will treat u kind & somehow go your way.
For I know that I done so much wrong me and you
I hate knowing that this pain is what I put you through.
So this is my poem to tell you again once more
I love you and will never walk out the door.
I hoping you know this and its something you can see.
Cause when you smile again,I hope you smile at me.
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2003-10-04 08:05:00]
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Re: Smile
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by norticus on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:05:21 AM AEST
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Re: Smile
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 07:14:28 PM AEST
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Awww that last line is lovely. Well the whole poem is lovely. Glad to see that you have something to live for...? Unlike your other two poems I read this one has hope. All the best.
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