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Long Nature
Contributed by
apollo
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Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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It is a gorgeous day,
it is strange how the nature works.
Long cold nights,
followed by bright sunny days.
What about violence?
Hurricanes, tornadoes, earthquakes,
they are so tragic to hear of.
How do these negative aspects play such a role in mankind?
I wonder who knows the true outcome of our Earth?
Could it end one thousand years from now?
Or maybe tomorrow?
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apollo
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2003-10-04 02:45:00]
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Re: Long Nature
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by garyh on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 03:32:39 AM AEST
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interesting thoughts you have.... its a great idea for a poem as well. The rythem is not very defined though... the first few lines are great... but then it gets thrown off course. too many syllabels in line 6 and 7 or maybe just not enough in line 5... and line 8 is too long...
im not trying to be harsh so sorry if i am... but i really do think this could be a good poem.. |
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Re: Long Nature
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by norticus on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 11:27:35 AM AEST
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| You're twisted. 4.3 on the Nortiscale. |
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