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Alone
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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All by herself as the night comes around
Trailing tears on her face,they fall without sound
The summers warm breeze,moves over her face
As her heart cries out for a tender embrace
The break of day brought such happiness and peace
But tonight all alone,her sorrows released
She sits on her porch,feeling empty and cold
Praying for a love she may always hold
With nobody to share,nobody to love
She looks to the skies,so pretty above
All by herself as the night comes around
Trailing tears on her face,they fall without sound
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LovingWhispers
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2003-10-03 17:05:00]
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Re: Alone
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 07:10:27 PM AEST
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| This makes my heart cry for you ... so beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: Alone
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:15:21 PM AEST
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| Unable to speak....heartbreaking.....and heart breaking... |
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Re: Alone
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:54:53 PM AEST
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Oh Whispers, I can empathise with this poem.. It is such a touching one... Hope things get better soon....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Alone
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 10:18:12 PM AEST
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OK now I am a willow all weepy....
Shari |
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:49:02 PM AEST
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| I am without words. Haunting and pain ridden write. Awesome poem! |
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