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Hell
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm finally here in the depths of Hell
And you, my friends, thought you knew me well
How could I complete such a horrendous task?
If you were my friends would you have to ask?
I kept telling myself I could do nothing right
Till it got to the point I couldn’t sleep at night
And when I did I was plagued with bad dreams
Nightmares of fires and volcanic streams
I thought ‘What’s the point if I’m nothing but bad?’
Till one day I cracked and finally went mad
I got out my knife and slit each wrist
Cause life was awful with twist after twist
As I bled to death that Sunday week
A tear of gladness slid down my cheek
Now I’m finally here in the depths of Hell
And you, my friends, thought you knew me well
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Bohemian_with_a_pen
... [
2003-10-03 10:05:00]
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Re: Hell
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by SinfullyTwisted on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 10:38:33 AM AEST
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| I relate....sad, sad. Kind of got me choked up. Great write. Keep it up. |
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Re: Hell
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:30:21 PM AEST
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Wow... I can almost relate to this... great write, I love the underlying bitterness.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Hell
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:41:26 PM AEST
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i liked this a lot although I thought the last line was a bit awkward. I especially liked the 1st and 3rd stanzas great poem. keep 'em coming.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Hell
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:10:56 AM AEST
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| Love the flow on this one. |
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Re: Hell
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by tormentedpixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:31:13 PM AEST
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| once again, another great write! |
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