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Free Of Hurt

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Look into my saddened eyes
Tell me what you see
The small child locked inside
Bleeding; Screaming "Save me!
Take me away from this worthless mind
Bring happiness to my lonesome soul
Dont let me slip into death's gate
Repair what's torn, make me whole"
Even hated by my most inner self
Can't seem to find remorse
Living this life isn't working out
I need to seek a different course
No one understands this pain
They just stare at my 'battle wounds'
They cant imagine most my thoughts
Are of the path chosen to my tomb
I see you don't like what I'm doing
Making new crimson rivers flow
Do you wish for me to write your name?
Maybe a happy face before you go?
If you don't like what I am
Just leave me like the rest
Though all you do is add to the pain,
Might aswell rip my heart from my chest
Atleast then I wouldnt feel anymore
All worries would cease to be
Drink my own blood before I fade
at last . . Im finally . . . free




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-10-03 09:35:00]
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Re: Free Of Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by hazelnut on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 10:07:11 AM AEST
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overwhelming pain. vivid.


Re: Free Of Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:31:52 PM AEST
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very vivid and well written indeed you express yourself very well. I hope the pain can subside for u soon and you can find wholeness for yourself in your words. I loved this.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Free Of Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 04:00:41 PM AEST
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This is the most painful and saddest poem I have ever read so far and the most wonderful as well....loved the striking imagery! I hope this phase of agony soon goes away. Stay well, friend!
Saira




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