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Young Woman
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tiny tears,
a childs laughter.
Hold her so close
from cold and harm.
Stepping so boldly into the world,
knowing I am there.
Imagine feelings here within,
as she rights the world she builds.
My heart grows weak,
I might cry a bit.
Little girl of tears,
little girl of giggles.
I straighten myself,
as this young woman approaches.....Crow
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2003-10-03 08:35:00]
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Re: Young Woman
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:51:27 AM AEST
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She will always be your "little girl"
But like the crow,she too must spread her wings and follow her dreams...
This is just so beautifully written. |
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Re: Young Woman
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:56:54 AM AEST
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beautiful write...they grow so fast
Shari |
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Re: Young Woman
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:28:23 AM AEST
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That's the hardest part...watching them bloom into young ladies when it seemed only yesterday they were little babies.
::::::hands crow a tissue:::::::: 0:-)
Affectionate write! Love it!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Young Woman
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 12:30:49 PM AEST
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| beautiful.........makes me catch my breath 'cause it reminds me of my daughter who's just turned 17:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Young Woman
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:19:03 PM AEST
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| you have a gift to cherish for a lifetime...and beyond.... |
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Re: Young Woman
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:14:05 PM AEST
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| Mmmm... awesome poem Crow! Such a beautiful portrait you have painted! |
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Re: Young Woman
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:49:58 PM AEST
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Crow you have touched every harp string in my heart.....all I hear is your music.
Lovingcritters
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Re: Young Woman
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by Merry on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 06:34:37 PM AEST
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you have captrued it so well - how fast our babies grow up - beautiful write
merry |
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Re: Young Woman
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 09:20:53 PM AEST
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I have lived this 3 times, I must live it again as the years pass. I tell you in truth, you have captured the moments perfectly.
Larry |
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Re: Young Woman
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by Saira on
Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 05:55:11 PM AEST
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Crow, you did it again....wonderful!
Saira |
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Re: Young Woman
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 06:27:19 AM AEST
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Really sad, enough to break a frozen heart, this was very well done, Excellent writing crow, it made me stop and think for a change.
Lokk forward to more of your writes in the future. |
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