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tavern of tears

Contributed by wassim on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 05:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

caught out from this life
by a razor blade & a knife
need to fall in again.....head out of this world
nothing in my heart i have stored
no need to be alive to suffer more
everythyin shut down like a door
let me go i want to fall
uninvataved life i need to call

what is the matter with you
for myself i am doing this too
melted tears that i brake throo
can almost taste freedom
not a trashed person
rather be dead..... honered from them
no....you can be intersted again
it can't vanish think about it then

no no look up see the sky
my life is one stupid damn lie
insparate......don't ask why
can you be depressed every second
candle eyes,turned to ach,falled to sand
to nobody i can be arrainged
that wasin't mattered
there no personnality i can be changed

look up again see the stars
there all shadern now all aparts
in vain collapsed can feel it starts
please don't think about your destiny
allready beng braked so as fantasy
can you think about it when your talkin to me
it's all ript off and soon reality
can face death mortaled to see
proud of what i can be

what?,humiliated in this night
when this moon is triking light
it's a sing stand back
from one step like a thousand track
acting like a fool like a wack
my heart fades more leave me alone
first gold then solid frozen then to stone

look down see the tavern
see those dropin tears like a sun
this dosin't go on like a song
falled but grabbed
by your hand beng rapped
let me go to scream my name
bug off the flame
beat in this death
can't also feel the breath
no stand up
i'm doing this like a love never stop
what are you saying
you don't have to be paying
i'm going with you
just to be near you
to still love you

we both falled
to love beng called
it was the only way
to live another day

Copyright © wassim ... [ 2003-10-03 05:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: tavern of tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 03:46:04 AM AEST
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Well this is good, but spellcheck helps too! The dreary themes here, I'm quite familiar with that one for sure. I like this.
~Remy~

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