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Do you see me?
Contributed by
nigelangel1
on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Do you see me, feel you touch you - kiss you
I love you, oh so much, please speak
Look, I'm sorry ... all my fault, I know
oh crazy yes, but we fight, they all fight
Why ignore me, I'm your cutie - oh c'mon
let's kiss, make up, oh ... hug a little
there, I'll tickle right where you like it
oh *****! please ... what's wrong?
This can't go on my darling, accept - I'm sorry
we could be happy darling, oh please
just put it all behind, let's love, and laugh
be happy again ... oh, let's cuddle ... kiss
For god's sake, how long will this go on?
you won't even look, or speak - or shout
you could at least tell me to go
get lost, not see again ... oh you know
I know, I went out kind of angry - mad
but you were just as much to blame
and as I drove off you were screaming
"damn you damn you" that hurt ... cut
You're sad, I see you cry - real tears
and on the phone to your mom
I heard you say you would get by
then with sigh, you cried again ... in pain?
So please, please make it up - sorry
you know you are the one for me
who else would I love so much as thee??
there, feel my arms, wrapped, warming ... nice
How can you just sit and read? - selfish
here I plead and you just sit, I don't get it,
give it here ... oh, in pic, that's me?
"Man killed in car crash, leaves wife, and kids,three
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2003-10-03 04:35:00]
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Re: Do you see me?
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by jaeann on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 01:25:29 PM AEST
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| i've lost too many to ever go to bed mad...or leave the house without a hug and kiss.......this is so terrifying....great work....reminds me of the "i see dead peopel" movie...the very end....omg...goosebumbs....or the new "nickleback" video....you did a great job!!! |
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Re: Do you see me?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 02:25:18 PM AEST
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So much of this is exactly what I'd like to say to somebody. And I have to agree about the Nickelback video, lol. This is so sad. Great write though.
~ Moonlit |
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